This is fascinating work. It's too early for me to say (vote) which aspect I like best but I'll tell you what stands out for this reader: the poetry of the writing (eg., repetition of phrases)and the concept of the emotion, grief, as a spiritual entity. I'll be back to see what happens.
this version of "Farewell Feeling" is largely experimental for me, and so the art is a little messy. please visit farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com to see this story's more "polished" full-page remake!
Ellison has never been able to feel sadness. This is because his Grief emotion experienced trauma with her previous human and has become afraid to do her job. But because of this, not only does Ellison nearly lose his best friend Ameko, but he starts to lose other emotions as well. So Noa, a boy at Ellison's school who is able to see peoples' emotions, decides to help. エリソンという男の子は悲しさを感じた事はない。その理由は彼のグリーフ(悲しい気持ち)が前の人間でトラウマーをしたわけです。けど悲しさが感じられないせいでエリソンは親友の雨子との別れが危なくなってるし、他の気持ちも感じられないくなってるし…だから同級生のノアがエリソンを助けようとします。
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Good Show, Yuri!
Hi,
This is fascinating work. It's too early for me to say (vote) which aspect I like best but I'll tell you what stands out for this reader: the poetry of the writing (eg., repetition of phrases)and the concept of the emotion, grief, as a spiritual entity. I'll be back to see what happens.
C.
Well, C, you're a few chapters in. If you haven't already, try and get around to reading from the beginning. It's very good. ^^
I liked the last panel the best. It's emotionally striking. I can feel Grief's grief already.
thank you, zerix-kun! ^^ both for the compliment and vote of confidence :)
Nice work.
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