I just caught up with this and I have to say, this is a great story. Honestly, I bet you could get it published, the script at least. I really like how you depict people's emotions as actual beings. I can't wait to for your next entry.
thank you so much, zerix-kun! it makes me so happy you like it :) my goal is definitely to get published...if not with this story, then with another one! ^^
and thanks for commenting -- it's hard to get people to comment :P
this version of "Farewell Feeling" is largely experimental for me, and so the art is a little messy. please visit farewellfeeling.smackjeeves.com to see this story's more "polished" full-page remake!
Ellison has never been able to feel sadness. This is because his Grief emotion experienced trauma with her previous human and has become afraid to do her job. But because of this, not only does Ellison nearly lose his best friend Ameko, but he starts to lose other emotions as well. So Noa, a boy at Ellison's school who is able to see peoples' emotions, decides to help. エリソンという男の子は悲しさを感じた事はない。その理由は彼のグリーフ(悲しい気持ち)が前の人間でトラウマーをしたわけです。けど悲しさが感じられないせいでエリソンは親友の雨子との別れが危なくなってるし、他の気持ちも感じられないくなってるし…だから同級生のノアがエリソンを助けようとします。
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I just caught up with this and I have to say, this is a great story. Honestly, I bet you could get it published, the script at least. I really like how you depict people's emotions as actual beings. I can't wait to for your next entry.
thank you so much, zerix-kun! it makes me so happy you like it :)
my goal is definitely to get published...if not with this story, then with another one! ^^
and thanks for commenting -- it's hard to get people to comment :P
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